
Use the passive voice: The second paragraph reports that ". . . hundreds of Palestinians were killed during the [Great March of Return] protests. . ." Why not "Israeli soldiers killed 183 Gazans and wounded another 9204. Gazans killed 1 Israeli and wounded 11."
Ignore the leading Israeli human rights organization: B'Tselem has issued impassioned warnings ever since the Israeli snipers first opened fire on Gazans back in 2018, including calling on soldiers to disobey orders to shoot. And just the other day, B'Tselem accused the Israeli military of wrongly dropping inquiries into 3 other killings and said the probes had only been originally opened to give "an illusion of a functioning apparatus for seeking accountability."
Cover up Israel's vicious right wing: No doubt Israeli settler/colonists and others are already blasting the one-month sentence as too harsh. Let's hear from them.
On the plus side, Times reporter David Halbfinger did give the victim's father a chance to speak. Rami Helles said that he feared the Israeli soldier's light punishment would continue to "encourage his colleagues to kill in cold blood."



Comment: Those figures bear repeating. 183 Gazans killed, 9204 wounded. 1 Israeli killed, 11 wounded. Israel is a rogue, murderous state. And the IDF soldier shouldn't have gotten only 1 month in prison. He should be imprisoned for life, or executed. But when the leaders of the country are just as criminal and murderous as the soldiers, you can't expect justice.
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